Summer

Summer sweat runs down Sunshine burning like Hades Blistering our mass

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Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 4/30/2009 1:04:00 PM

Cecil summer is very special to you my friend. What reminds me most about summer is; MY SUMMER LOVE. he-he-he. Nce Haiku. Ernilando

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/30/2009 12:05:00 AM

The sense of heat burning the body is captured well in your summer haiku, Cecil. Hope you are doing well. Love this poem; don't know how I missed it before! Love, Carolyn

Date: 4/18/2009 4:18:00 PM

Nice use of alliteration for a creative view. Best wishes to you if you are entering this in the contest. Keep on writing. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/18/2009 6:26:00 AM

Oh that oppressive summer heat and humidity! Captured so well. Love, Shar

Arany P.

Date: 4/18/2009 3:15:00 AM

well written, Cecil! ~ Arany

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/17/2009 7:12:00 PM

Nice work Cecil, I enjoy writng haiku...Raul