Summer

Summer sweat runs down
Sunshine burning like Hades
Blistering our mass

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Ernilando Tugaff

April 30, 2009 at 1:04 PM

Cecil summer is very special to you my friend. What reminds me most about summer is; MY SUMMER LOVE. he-he-he. Nce Haiku. Ernilando

Carolyn Devonshire

April 30, 2009 at 12:05 AM

The sense of heat burning the body is captured well in your summer haiku, Cecil. Hope you are doing well. Love this poem; don't know how I missed it before! Love, Carolyn

April 18, 2009 at 4:18 PM

Nice use of alliteration for a creative view. Best wishes to you if you are entering this in the contest. Keep on writing. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen