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leaves grabbing sunlight panting of mammals and birds life gripped in summer PLACE: 3rd Summer Nature Themed Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Syllable Count: How Many Syllables Date: 25-06-2022

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/6/2022 12:41:00 PM

Very descriptive winning work. Congrats. Way to go. Sara

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 7/17/2022 10:38:00 PM

Thank you so much for the compliments!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2022 4:46:00 PM

wow, except for the birds panting, I found this one to be one of the best thought out in haiku form . Congrats on the win.

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 7/17/2022 10:37:00 PM

Thank you so much for the compliments!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/4/2022 7:49:00 AM

Patri, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative haiku!

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 7/17/2022 10:37:00 PM

Thank you so much for the compliments!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/4/2022 4:49:00 AM

" life gripped" - Realistic scene. Congratulations!

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 7/17/2022 10:36:00 PM

Thank you so much for the compliments!