Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Haiku

Summer

leaves grabbing sunlight

                                panting of mammals and birds

                                    life gripped in summer




PLACE: 3rd

Summer Nature Themed Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
Syllable Count:  How Many Syllables
Date: 25-06-2022

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Sara Kendrick July 6, 2022 at 12:41 PM Very descriptive winning work. Congrats. Way to go. Sara Patri Venkata Ramana July 17, 2022 at 10:38 PM Thank you so much for the compliments!

Andrea Dietrich July 4, 2022 at 4:46 PM wow, except for the birds panting, I found this one to be one of the best thought out in haiku form . Congrats on the win. Patri Venkata Ramana July 17, 2022 at 10:37 PM Thank you so much for the compliments!

Tania Kitchin July 4, 2022 at 7:49 AM Patri, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative haiku! Patri Venkata Ramana July 17, 2022 at 10:37 PM Thank you so much for the compliments!

Christuraj Alex July 4, 2022 at 4:49 AM " life gripped" - Realistic scene. Congratulations! Patri Venkata Ramana July 17, 2022 at 10:36 PM Thank you so much for the compliments!