Andrea Dietrich Poet Diamante

Summer

Sun
brilliant, hot
warming, shining, baking
daylight, beams, showers, deluge
drizzling, streaming, pelting
melodious, refreshing
Rain

May 2, 2021
for Caren Krutsinger's 'Spring or Summer Diamante Poem ' Poetry Contest

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Modupe Sefunmi August 7, 2021 at 3:30 PM It is a great delight to read from you again after such a long time.

Connie Marcum Wong May 6, 2021 at 6:03 PM I think this is the perfect Diamanté, using the contrast between sun and rain. I love this one which is one of the best I have read. Blessings xxoo

James Peranteau May 4, 2021 at 8:56 AM The rain plump down! Great write dear poet! Have a wonderful Spring Andrea...much love, james

Victor Buhagiar May 4, 2021 at 6:01 AM Lovely diamante, from sun to rain. Seems we are not going to have a middle season this year.

David Scott May 3, 2021 at 7:36 PM Lovly description of change of season davidscott

Paghunda Zahid May 3, 2021 at 6:50 PM Wah.. What a great write! I hope it will be placed Andrea Dietrich May 3, 2021 at 10:03 PM probably not. but I'm giving it a try.

Gershon Wolf May 3, 2021 at 5:32 PM You've painted the best of both worlds here, Andrea. Summer sunshine, followed by refreshing rain. Can't wait! :) gw

JC Brul May 3, 2021 at 3:32 PM So lovely! Your poem is always entertaining dear Andrea. Bringing good vibes always!

Kyle Kriticos May 3, 2021 at 2:05 PM I really like this poem and the way this poem ended it left me feeling refreshed!

Kim Rodrigues May 3, 2021 at 1:36 PM Great!

Sara Kendrick May 3, 2021 at 9:36 AM Good contrast. We are supposed to have 3 days of the later half. We need rain again so that is okay. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara

Line Gauthier May 3, 2021 at 7:25 AM beautiful, Andrea ~

Regina Mcintosh May 3, 2021 at 5:59 AM Love it. Sure to win. God bless you always with faith, hope and love. Love, Gina

Vijay Pandit May 3, 2021 at 5:19 AM Nicely done Andrea--your poem transitions beautifully from a sunny day into one that begins to rain. All the best.

Sotto Poet May 3, 2021 at 3:31 AM I enjoyed reading your diamante, it's very well done; good luck in the contest hugs Andrea