Summer

Summertime sombreros hammocks imbibing sweating traipsing beach sunbathing lake ice skating gorging freezing stumbling balaclavas eiderdowns Wintertime Spring or Summer Diamante Poem Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger 01/05/2021

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Juliet Ligon

Date: 5/20/2021 9:41:00 AM

I enjoyed your unique descriptions, especially the sombreros and hammocks. Congratulations!

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/20/2021 10:28:00 AM

Heya Juliet, I’m absolutely delighted with the placement and your wonderful comment cheers David

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/20/2021 9:30:00 AM

Congratulations On your Win David, you deserve it my friend because you penned you nice one. Have a good day

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/20/2021 10:30:00 AM

Thank you Lasaad, always delighted to get a high placement, and your comments, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 5/3/2021 4:25:00 PM

Fetch my Sombrero

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/4/2021 2:04:00 AM

Don’t forget the hammock, and a nice strong cocktail, ah yes, cheers David

Jan Allison

Date: 5/3/2021 3:50:00 AM

We chose the same seasons to compare I really like your poem the imagery is lovely:-) hugs Jan xx

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/3/2021 5:30:00 AM

Thanks Jan these Diamanté’s are tricky you have to think positive and negative all at once, was my first try at one, so I’m happy just to get one under my belt, cheers David

Judy Ball

Date: 5/1/2021 6:44:00 PM

Very nicely done my friend. A clever piece of work. Hope it's a winner. God Bless, JB

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/2/2021 12:42:00 AM

First try at a diamante Judy, they really are a reverse jigsaw puzzle, thank you so much for kind comments, cheers David

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/1/2021 3:46:00 PM

What an incredible contrast between summer and winter, scurrying among the sandless beachgoers. It's a superb diamante; blessings and regards, dearest David

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/1/2021 3:52:00 PM

Heya Lasaad, thank you so much, first ever Diamanté, Milton urged me to give it a go, a little unsure about the form, but it’s a work in progress, cheers David

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/1/2021 3:35:00 PM

Hello David Kavangh, summer is my favourite season. I like the warm weather. I like the lovely sunshine. Ilike the clear sky to watch the stars with the full moon shinning brightly. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/2/2021 10:13:00 AM

Hello David, thank you David. I hope our summer will be a good one. i am looking forward to it. Cheers Darlene

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/1/2021 3:48:00 PM

You certainly do Darlene, your comment is almost a poem in itself, fantastic imagery, thank you so much for looking in, and I hope you get a great summer, cheers David