David Kavanagh Poet Diamante

Summer

Summertime 
             sombreros hammocks
         imbibing sweating traipsing 
     beach sunbathing lake ice skating 
          gorging freezing stumbling 
             balaclavas eiderdowns 
                     Wintertime 
                   


Spring or Summer Diamante Poem Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger  01/05/2021

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Juliet Ligon May 20, 2021 at 9:41 AM I enjoyed your unique descriptions, especially the sombreros and hammocks. Congratulations! David Kavanagh May 20, 2021 at 10:28 AM Heya Juliet, I’m absolutely delighted with the placement and your wonderful comment cheers David

Sotto Poet May 20, 2021 at 9:30 AM Congratulations On your Win David, you deserve it my friend because you penned you nice one. Have a good day David Kavanagh May 20, 2021 at 10:30 AM Thank you Lasaad, always delighted to get a high placement, and your comments, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty May 3, 2021 at 4:25 PM Fetch my Sombrero David Kavanagh May 4, 2021 at 2:04 AM Don’t forget the hammock, and a nice strong cocktail, ah yes, cheers David

Jan Allison May 3, 2021 at 3:50 AM We chose the same seasons to compare I really like your poem the imagery is lovely:-) hugs Jan xx David Kavanagh May 3, 2021 at 5:30 AM Thanks Jan these Diamanté’s are tricky you have to think positive and negative all at once, was my first try at one, so I’m happy just to get one under my belt, cheers David

Judy Ball May 1, 2021 at 6:44 PM Very nicely done my friend. A clever piece of work. Hope it's a winner. God Bless, JB David Kavanagh May 2, 2021 at 12:42 AM First try at a diamante Judy, they really are a reverse jigsaw puzzle, thank you so much for kind comments, cheers David

Sotto Poet May 1, 2021 at 3:46 PM What an incredible contrast between summer and winter, scurrying among the sandless beachgoers. It's a superb diamante; blessings and regards, dearest David David Kavanagh May 1, 2021 at 3:52 PM Heya Lasaad, thank you so much, first ever Diamanté, Milton urged me to give it a go, a little unsure about the form, but it’s a work in progress, cheers David

Darlene De Beaulieu May 1, 2021 at 3:35 PM Hello David Kavangh, summer is my favourite season. I like the warm weather. I like the lovely sunshine. Ilike the clear sky to watch the stars with the full moon shinning brightly. Enjoy your evening my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu May 2, 2021 at 10:13 AM Hello David, thank you David. I hope our summer will be a good one. i am looking forward to it. Cheers Darlene David Kavanagh May 1, 2021 at 3:48 PM You certainly do Darlene, your comment is almost a poem in itself, fantastic imagery, thank you so much for looking in, and I hope you get a great summer, cheers David