Summer

Heartbeat attraction Fairy tale quest, green and lush Ringside seat of love Composed June 25/2020

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/7/2020 7:57:00 AM

Soothing summer haiku Brian. Congratulations on your win!

Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/7/2020 10:50:00 AM

Thank you. I am rather surprised at the placement as I am still much of a poetry novice exploring ideas + word combinations. Best wishes Brian

John Watt

Date: 7/5/2020 12:02:00 AM

Sweet and summery. Congratulations on your wonderful win ~ John

Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/7/2020 10:52:00 AM

Thank you for your feedback John. Now if we had more rain with our summer heat the lush greenery would keep its vigor. Cheers Brian

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/4/2020 4:26:00 PM

A summer delight Brian! Congratulations on your outstanding First Place win! Blessings xxoo

Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/7/2020 10:53:00 AM

Kind of you to comment Connie. Much appreciated. Brian

Brenda Chiri

Date: 7/4/2020 3:56:00 PM

Nicely done! Congrats on a top win!;)

Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/7/2020 10:55:00 AM

Thank you Brenda. I am startled by the placement. So many first rate poets on poetrysoup.com. Enjoy summer. Best wishes Brian