Summer

Heartbeat attraction
Fairy tale quest, green and lush
Ringside seat of love














Composed June 25/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mishra Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 7:57 AM
Soothing summer haiku Brian. Congratulations on your win!
Sambourne Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 10:50 AM
Thank you. I am rather surprised at the placement as I am still much of a poetry novice exploring ideas + word combinations. Best wishes Brian
Watt Avatar
July 5, 2020 at 12:02 AM
Sweet and summery. Congratulations on your wonderful win ~ John
Sambourne Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 10:52 AM
Thank you for your feedback John. Now if we had more rain with our summer heat the lush greenery would keep its vigor. Cheers Brian
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 4:26 PM
A summer delight Brian! Congratulations on your outstanding First Place win! Blessings xxoo
Sambourne Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 10:53 AM
Kind of you to comment Connie. Much appreciated. Brian
Chiri Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 3:56 PM
Nicely done! Congrats on a top win!;)
Sambourne Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 10:55 AM
Thank you Brenda. I am startled by the placement. So many first rate poets on poetrysoup.com. Enjoy summer. Best wishes Brian
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