Summer

Day walks very slow beauty displays its power for life to blossom. The sun is unmasked for proud nature to embrace and put fun in charge.

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Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 4/29/2021 7:01:00 PM

"Day walks very slow..." Brilliant! I love all four seasons, but Summer set my soul aglow with kiss of radiant rays.

Funom Makama
Date: 4/30/2021 6:20:00 AM

Thank you so much Iris..

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/27/2021 7:41:00 PM

lovely ~ we're ready for summer ~ come on over !

Funom Makama
Date: 4/27/2021 8:17:00 PM

yeeeaaaah!! And this year's summer will be beautiful....

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/14/2020 5:16:00 PM

Delightful, Funam Panagiota Romios

Funom Makama
Date: 7/17/2020 6:24:00 AM

Thank you so much friend.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 7/1/2020 3:47:00 PM

Beautiful, Haiku, Funom! So meaningful in so few words! That's what a perfect Haiku is! Best wishes, Mala

Funom Makama
Date: 7/17/2020 6:24:00 AM

Thank you Malabika

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/29/2020 2:38:00 PM

Fun summer poem, Funom.

Funom Makama
Date: 6/30/2020 5:04:00 PM

Thank you so much Line Gauthier

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 6/29/2020 5:30:00 AM

Nice one. Fun truely in charge. What else do we need? Kind wishes, Kai

Funom Makama
Date: 6/30/2020 5:04:00 PM

Thank you so much Kai Michael

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/25/2020 3:57:00 PM

I REALLY like your haiku, Funom--lovely and descriptive. Janice

Funom Makama
Date: 6/25/2020 4:22:00 PM

Thank you so much Janice Canerdy

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/24/2020 4:41:00 PM

Lovely haiku Funom, hope you are well. Good luck in the contest Tom

Funom Makama
Date: 6/25/2020 8:22:00 AM

Thank you Tom, I really need this luck

Ilene Bauer

Date: 6/24/2020 3:30:00 PM

these are very lovely haikus, fumom. best of luck in the contest...

Funom Makama
Date: 6/25/2020 8:22:00 AM

Thank you ilene bauer. I need this luck

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/24/2020 5:39:00 AM

days walking through the heart of ray....sun exposing it's lips to hug the nature with warmth///////

Funom Makama
Date: 6/25/2020 8:22:00 AM

Wow! What a great reply.. If this should be a Haiku, it should follow the 5-7-5 pattern