Summer

Day walks very slow
beauty displays its power
for life to blossom.

The sun is unmasked
for proud nature to embrace
and put fun in charge.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Sankey- Lewis Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 7:01 PM
"Day walks very slow..." Brilliant! I love all four seasons, but Summer set my soul aglow with kiss of radiant rays.
Makama Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 6:20 AM
Thank you so much Iris..
Gauthier Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 7:41 PM
lovely ~ we're ready for summer ~ come on over !
Makama Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 8:17 PM
yeeeaaaah!! And this year's summer will be beautiful....
Romios Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 5:16 PM
Delightful, Funam Panagiota Romios
Makama Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 6:24 AM
Thank you so much friend.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 3:47 PM
Beautiful, Haiku, Funom! So meaningful in so few words! That's what a perfect Haiku is! Best wishes, Mala
Makama Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 6:24 AM
Thank you Malabika
Gauthier Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 2:38 PM
Fun summer poem, Funom.
Makama Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 5:04 PM
Thank you so much Line Gauthier
Neumann Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 5:30 AM
Nice one. Fun truely in charge. What else do we need? Kind wishes, Kai
Makama Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 5:04 PM
Thank you so much Kai Michael
Canerdy Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 3:57 PM
I REALLY like your haiku, Funom--lovely and descriptive. Janice
Makama Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 4:22 PM
Thank you so much Janice Canerdy
Cunningham Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 4:41 PM
Lovely haiku Funom, hope you are well. Good luck in the contest Tom
Makama Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 8:22 AM
Thank you Tom, I really need this luck
Bauer Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 3:30 PM
these are very lovely haikus, fumom. best of luck in the contest...
Makama Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 8:22 AM
Thank you ilene bauer. I need this luck
Bangalee Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 5:39 AM
days walking through the heart of ray....sun exposing it's lips to hug the nature with warmth///////
Makama Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 8:22 AM
Wow! What a great reply.. If this should be a Haiku, it should follow the 5-7-5 pattern
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