Summer

Day walks very slow
beauty displays its power
for life to blossom.

The sun is unmasked
for proud nature to embrace
and put fun in charge.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 4/29/2021 7:01:00 PM
"Day walks very slow..." Brilliant! I love all four seasons, but Summer set my soul aglow with kiss of radiant rays.
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/30/2021 6:20:00 AM
Thank you so much Iris..
Date: 4/27/2021 7:41:00 PM
lovely ~ we're ready for summer ~ come on over !
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/27/2021 8:17:00 PM
yeeeaaaah!! And this year's summer will be beautiful....
Date: 7/14/2020 5:16:00 PM
Delightful, Funam Panagiota Romios
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/17/2020 6:24:00 AM
Thank you so much friend.
Date: 7/1/2020 3:47:00 PM
Beautiful, Haiku, Funom! So meaningful in so few words! That's what a perfect Haiku is! Best wishes, Mala
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/17/2020 6:24:00 AM
Thank you Malabika
Date: 6/29/2020 2:38:00 PM
Fun summer poem, Funom.
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/30/2020 5:04:00 PM
Thank you so much Line Gauthier
Date: 6/29/2020 5:30:00 AM
Nice one. Fun truely in charge. What else do we need? Kind wishes, Kai
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/30/2020 5:04:00 PM
Thank you so much Kai Michael
Date: 6/25/2020 3:57:00 PM
I REALLY like your haiku, Funom--lovely and descriptive. Janice
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/25/2020 4:22:00 PM
Thank you so much Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/24/2020 4:41:00 PM
Lovely haiku Funom, hope you are well. Good luck in the contest Tom
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/25/2020 8:22:00 AM
Thank you Tom, I really need this luck
Date: 6/24/2020 3:30:00 PM
these are very lovely haikus, fumom. best of luck in the contest...
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/25/2020 8:22:00 AM
Thank you ilene bauer. I need this luck
Date: 6/24/2020 5:39:00 AM
days walking through the heart of ray....sun exposing it's lips to hug the nature with warmth///////
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/25/2020 8:22:00 AM
Wow! What a great reply.. If this should be a Haiku, it should follow the 5-7-5 pattern
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