Summer

Summer Summer 
it is here
Summer Summer 
lets go cheer
Summer Summer
Jump in the air
Summer Summer 
it is here
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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November 4, 2019 at 8:17 AM
This started out strong "I'm just the pieces of the person I used to be" that line pulls in the reader. I think you've got some great thoughts here. The layout could be cleaned up to make it read easier. Well done on getting these thoughts wrote, these are the foundations to great poetry.
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November 4, 2019 at 8:09 AM
Fun and bubbly this sounds. ;)
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