Summer

golden spears
wither my poppies
summertime
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Foulk Avatar
July 28, 2008 at 8:39 AM
nice haku. about my poem silent voices, my soul has left my body pretty much tells what happened. and yes it could be improved, but thank you for reading it and for your comments.
Degenhardt Avatar
July 23, 2008 at 5:22 AM
This is wonderfully descriptive and has a terrific flow to it making for a enjoyable and quite understandable read. Michael
Foulk Avatar
July 22, 2008 at 2:59 PM
a great piece of poetry. well penned
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