Summer

golden spears
wither my poppies
summertime

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James Foulk

Date: 7/28/2008 8:39:00 AM

nice haku. about my poem silent voices, my soul has left my body pretty much tells what happened. and yes it could be improved, but thank you for reading it and for your comments.

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 7/23/2008 5:22:00 AM

This is wonderfully descriptive and has a terrific flow to it making for a enjoyable and quite understandable read. Michael

James Foulk

Date: 7/22/2008 2:59:00 PM

a great piece of poetry. well penned