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Of course, I have to write for this challenge on the BEST season of them all!

For children, summer is swing sets and slides, ice cream or snow cones, carnival rides, the school bell’s last ring as kids flee the school, hot dogs at ball games and days at the pool. It’s pitching a tent and eating s’mores, then down at the lake with rowboat and oars. Summer’s the chasing of fireflies at night and telling of ghost tales in flickering light. It’s skateboards and bikes and just feeling free, a volleyball net in the sand by the sea. It’s summer vacation in one’s family car with stops at motels when traveling far. It’s sitting on blankets, eyes up at the sky while watching the fireworks on Fourth of July Summer’s a caterpillar; we want it to c r a w l, then turn into a butterfly, the brightest of all! It’s corn on the cob, and ever so sweet - the melon the kid in us all wants to eat! May 30, 2019 For Sheri Fresonke Harper's Objectifying A Season Poetry Contest

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Date: 1/5/2020 10:56:00 PM
Hi Andrea, This poem just made me smile and remember all the things I love about summer. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/5/2020 6:53:00 PM
Andrea, this was a souper fun ride through all the great memories of summer vacation. I especially like, "the school bell’s last ring as kids flee the school". My two favorite moments of any given year were Christmas morning and that last school bell in June. Awesome, my friend. Congrats! Hugs ~ John
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Date: 1/4/2020 7:30:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on your top win! I loved the poem!;)
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Date: 6/6/2019 9:21:00 AM
How cute! It is summer here and the temperature is 40 degree celsius....
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Date: 6/4/2019 2:11:00 PM
Love you poem!!
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Date: 6/3/2019 5:00:00 PM
Back with congratulations … Hugs
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Date: 6/3/2019 7:59:00 AM
CONGRATS on your win with this great poem, Andrea! Janice
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Date: 6/2/2019 10:17:00 PM
What a fun poem! Congrats on your well deserved gold medal win, Andrea.
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Date: 6/2/2019 8:53:00 PM
My sincerest compliments for your righteous 1st Place win Andrea, Aloha William
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Date: 6/2/2019 8:37:00 PM
Lovely poem Andrea, I especially like how musical it is while fulfilling all the contest requirements! I feel right in the midst of summer, congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 6/2/2019 3:45:00 AM
A lovely poem about children and summer - what else would a child want for - you have covered their every pleasure- good luck in the contest my dear friend, Hugs and love Jenny
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Date: 6/1/2019 10:17:00 AM
Perfect summer in every line. Bravo, Andrea. Good luck in contest)
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Date: 6/1/2019 12:55:00 AM
This is a treasure Andrea. You have captured all of the wonderful things of summer in this fantastic poem that is sure to be at the top of the list! A Fave from me my friend! : ) xxoo
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Date: 5/31/2019 8:48:00 PM
Your forte, dear poet! You see through lovely eyes! GL in contest!
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Date: 5/31/2019 6:05:00 PM
Wow, sis. As I was reading this it was like music popped into my head and I was swinging to the beat of your beautiful Summer poem.
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Date: 5/31/2019 3:52:00 PM
You leave us no doubt about your love for summer, Andrea! This is a delightful poem which highlights the many things one can enjoy during this season. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 5/31/2019 1:40:00 PM
Nicely caught and reported, Andrea! Good luck! Rico
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Date: 5/31/2019 8:08:00 AM
Wow!! This poem projected Summer in the most positive way!!! Wow!! Summer was like this in my childhood. Now, the story has changed. Here, in India, summer is not allowing us to do any of those things that we used to earlier. It's burning not just the skin but the organs inside. UFF!!!! I wish the beauty in summer that I once saw as a child comes back. Till then, I will read and re-read this poem :)
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Date: 5/31/2019 7:03:00 AM
Lively and bouncy..and happy like summer..so well written, Andrea!
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Date: 5/31/2019 3:20:00 AM
Lovely summer images in your verse Andrea. You're right it is the best season. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 5/30/2019 10:33:00 PM
Hello Andrea … a little envious. We just copped our first Antarctic blast and it was freezing, so I needed your poem to warm me up in the mind at least - Lindsay
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Date: 5/30/2019 8:42:00 PM
Perfect for the contest.. Hugs Eve
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