Suitcase Senryu

til death do us part
                    still breathing with a suitcase
                    another lie
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Upton Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 6:41 AM
my goodness Charlie, how painful my only vow has ever been "to tell the truth"
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 6:16 PM
Hello Charlie Knowlton, Wow! Have a nice evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 1:24 PM
Glad to hear it. have a nice day my friend.
Knowlton Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 7:04 PM
Thank you Darlene… You as well…Your response encourages my craziness.
Gauthier Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 5:01 PM
Brilliant !
Knowlton Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 7:08 PM
You have no idea how much I love having your ingredients added to this this big bowl of delicious soup. Many thanks Line...
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