Suicide Note

He loves me? He loves me not?

The last petal falls and suddenly I’m hot.

Hot all over, the room is spinning,

I’m fighting to stay up, I’m certainly not winning

My legs are shaking,

My heart is aching

The knife is close, oh so very near

It’s right on the table; don’t you see it, dear?

Time is running out fast,

Rest assured, this breath will be my last

No one has to worry about me and my crap anymore

I’m sinking to my death, my blood decorating the floor

Then, when I die, Let us dance, darling, in the depths of this Hell

Our souls festering, burning, do not dwell

And then, finally, we shall break this venomous love spell.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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August 16, 2010 at 11:28 AM
Stopping by to wish you a wonderful inspiration filled week. I enjoyed reading your poetry today, thank you for sharing it Kristen. Love, Carol
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