Randy Johnson Poet Rhyme

Suicide In Wal-Mart

A man went in Wal-mart and committed suicide.
The poor people who saw this must be traumatized.
Suicide is wrong but it's even worse to do it in a public place.
He probably did it because he had problems that he couldn't face.

I wish that man hadn't committed suicide.
He wanted a lot of people to watch as he died.
The reason why that man shot himself is unknown.
But those people wouldn't be traumatized if he had done it when he was alone.

(This is a true story that happened in Morristown, Tennessee.)

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James Foulk March 30, 2011 at 8:58 AM yes that was wrong for that man to do that it was wrong for people to see that also.

Sara Kendrick March 27, 2011 at 2:05 PM This man was very angry with someone or someones..It was sad that others had to witness the scene..He had something really bad going on in his life..Sara