Suicide Dawn

Clear morning
no warning impedes
the intention of many
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Denholm-Young Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 6:54 AM
Ominous. I don't think suicide is a sin. But you capture the shadow on the day's arrival across the world.
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May 10, 2015 at 12:20 PM
Uwe, wow... I don't see the meaning of this. A sin to end life this way. powerful haiku. SKAT
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