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Suicide Can Smile

She didn't look like herself Something was wrong She was too pale Her lips were painted red And her skin was ice cold Her eyes a soft blue Young but so old The faint beating of her fragile heart Such a sight would tear you apart She lays in her bed limbs un-moving Like a horror scene straight out of a movie Her breath like an air conditioner comes out cold The note on her dresser she had to fold Her eyes glaze over And her lungs collaspse She takes one last breath And she dies with a laugh R.I.P Sabrina Martinez

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/3/2010 1:54:00 PM
niice poem!..although its sad you've written it well!..thanks for checkin out my poem!.
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Date: 3/30/2010 9:57:00 AM
Enjoyed the poem, just think suicide is not the way to go . Enjoyed.
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Date: 3/18/2010 12:41:00 PM
Good poem but suicide is some messed up stuff.
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Date: 2/10/2010 4:27:00 PM
GOOD POEM I LIKE POEMS ABOUT REAL PEOPLE..SORRY ABOUT YOUR LOST. I ALSO ENJOYEDYOUR COMMENTS ON MY 2 POEMS.THANKS FOR BEING REAL...I.T.
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Date: 2/9/2010 9:23:00 AM
Very powerful words, this is something i, in a way, relate to. Both losing people i love and care about to suicide and sometimes nearly doing it myself. good work on this poem, you carried it out very well. .:Rain:.
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Date: 2/2/2010 12:22:00 PM
This is a very powerful poem and i am sorry about Sabrina.
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Date: 1/27/2010 1:42:00 PM
Yes, what Nathan said, very nice though sad. I really liked reading it! Glad you liked my deathly rose! LUv, andrea
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Date: 1/25/2010 2:13:00 PM
sounds like she mocked life happily... well put together and unique. Thanks! -Susan Mills
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