Suicide

Triangle Squares and crooked lines
Imagine this within the minds
Of those confused and lost in a way
I can't put in words
I can't even say
They were brought in this world for a reason I know
Maybe to suffer maybe to show
How lucky we are to be free from a state
Of mental confusion
Destruction high rate
Suicide.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Austin Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 10:38 AM
One wonders what goes on in the suicide's mind? God help me, I don't want to know. Congrats on the selection. daver
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July 27, 2014 at 5:50 PM
Ned, This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~
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July 26, 2014 at 8:25 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Ned. I enjoyed reading this first poem you posted. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
Ayala Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 4:00 PM
Beautiful, inspirational write that I enjoyed reading! Best wishes.
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July 26, 2014 at 9:41 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Ned :) - I choose your first deep written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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July 25, 2014 at 8:54 PM
Hello Ned, I wish the world was free from it.. A deep poem my friend.... Linda
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