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Suicide

I live with a needle and thread U live with a gun to your head I try to keep my feelings outside And you put your feelings in suicide  My life has just begun And yours has ended with the rise of the sun Angels watch over me today While they come here to take you away You chose dark  And i chose light You chose sad While i chose delight Ive wanted to be gone And not to return But i never chose it For i have learned If i die nothing is solved Because my life would soon evolve But if i take this ugly rope To show i have lost all hope Nothing will change for me I would hurt my friends and family  I chose strength  While you chose weakness I see the sun And you see darkness My hopes for this letter Is something good  To make someones choice a little bit better  Because you know i would Dont think for a second, i dont care  I may not know you  But ill always be there No matter what you do So this poem isn't about you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/10/2011 3:47:00 PM
very very sad is this description of extreme loss..love,Deb
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