Suicide

I live with a needle and thread
U live with a gun to your head
I try to keep my feelings outside
And you put your feelings in suicide 
My life has just begun
And yours has ended with the rise of the sun
Angels watch over me today
While they come here to take you away
You chose dark 
And i chose light
You chose sad
While i chose delight
Ive wanted to be gone
And not to return
But i never chose it
For i have learned
If i die nothing is solved
Because my life would soon evolve
But if i take this ugly rope
To show i have lost all hope
Nothing will change for me
I would hurt my friends and family 
I chose strength 
While you chose weakness
I see the sun
And you see darkness
My hopes for this letter
Is something good 
To make someones choice a little bit better 
Because you know i would
Dont think for a second, i dont care 
I may not know you 
But ill always be there
No matter what you do
So this poem isn't about you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 10, 2011 at 3:47 PM
very very sad is this description of extreme loss..love,Deb
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