Suicide

brake the bond
child and father
touch the innocents
that was built 
for the alter

an offering
to end all suffering
to slaughter 
your own daughter
in lustful thinking
your own life
starts shrinking

She trusted you
until you did her wrong
she tried for years
to find a place
where she
belonged

you looked over her
in the years to come
watching her unravel
because of you've done
 
you stole her birthing right
to choose when to give
the innocents
of life
to one in which she claims
she calls you one in of many names

FATHER
daddy, oh what did I do
to get hated today
no daddy I don't wish to play
I'm sick of this game

She begs and crys
but no one hears
she was hurt and broken
for many years

Now look at me daddy
do you like what you see
the blonde haired girl
looking back at me
she no longer questions
what she did wrong
I know now daddy it was
you all along

S-o why say your sorry
U-ntil your mean it 
I-nside you dieing?
C-an't really see it
I- tried to help you but you,
D-estroyed yourself
E-ventually daddy, there is no more help!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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