Suicide

Imagine how lost you would be
To go searching for death

Imagine how it must feel to be
So alone in this world of millions

Imagine being told you weren't useful
And actually believing it

Imagine being so sad
You can't even cry

Imagine feeling like 
There is only one choice

Imagine standing alone
Pointing a gun at your own head

Just imagine



Author's note: A friend can mean more to someone then you know, so be a friend, it can really change 
someone's view on the world.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Burton Avatar
January 9, 2009 at 6:17 PM
deep..... and i really like the cockyness of this poetry. It crosses forbidden lines of suicide and you are not afraid to travel through its possibiltys. thank god i love food to much to ever take my life.
Dvorkis Avatar
January 9, 2009 at 5:59 PM
"More people die from suicide than are killed by all of the wars and all of the crime in the world combined. As just one example, more firefighters die from suicide than are ever killed in fires" - Your Immortal Reality by Gary Renard. You touched on humanity's darkest secret and your note is the only answer. I'm speechless.
Daniells Avatar
January 9, 2009 at 3:26 PM
Great work on creating a state of confusion and question! That is difficult to accomplish. The poem reads fast though, try and slow it down with punctuation.
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