Suicidal Bomber

i and my killer
standing face to face
i can see the redness in his eyes
he would have not slept last night
i and my killer
we have never met before
we are complete stranger to each other
perhaps he not knew neither i
why he is going to kill me 
i have kids back home
he is in his teen should be alone
but now the time has finished 
we are ready to go in the tunnel of dark
we will be no longer i and he
we will be a news article hereafter
i have no fear
i have only worry
how to save my kids 
from becoming a next suicidal bomber
o my killer 
let it be the last victim
let the world lovely as it was before you
u need my blood its there
not for ugly thoughts of you
but for the promising new peaceful world

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 8/16/2013 5:13:00 AM
Being a good poetic verve ,not to target any one ,you may just write it up for one side, whether for martyrs or for those who die with their young blood, try to add consonantic manner and avoid short term of verbs.Best wishes.
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Date: 11/4/2009 9:38:00 AM
A painful dark yet compelling write indeed great work
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Date: 11/4/2009 8:36:00 AM
Thank you for demising cold killing based on killing euphoria in your poem, and thank you for spitting over moslim murderers who do not understand Jesus Christ and His ten commandments. God blesses truthful apostates. Pls comment my poetry-SweetRyhme...thankfully.
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Kamran Rashid
Date: 5/12/2013 2:22:00 PM
tht''s not rght//islam iz the religion of peace...y r u considering oll muslims as terrorists.... terrorism iz what makes u conscious about yourslf,,whch brings the fear to u... then 4 a kid a teacher iz a terrorist,,a policeman iz a terrorist aswell..if u consider things lyk that.. STOP DIVIDING & STAY UNITED...
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