Suggestively Subjective
when i
first saw
you your
hair was
in a wrap
almost seeming
African in the
presentation
of yourself
was there hidden
a tumbling down
lost treasure that
i found or was she
bald but that never
phased me because
i saw her face without
make up yet made to be
simple purity of
poetry in motion
yet emotionally
i only need to
just softly speak
for how dare i
might mistak
ingly awaken
her from her
night dreams
and take her
into my day
dreams
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