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Sugar Coated

a sparkling glazed sheen
sunshine on my windowpane
noonday blooms below

goldfinch bush and tree
are awash in dazzling light
as pale sunbeams dance
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Wolf Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 2:35 PM
Very nicely imaged... Haven't seen such sunbeams around for awhile. Better adjust my vision, methinks. Sunbeams and Joy, Gershon
Buehler Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 2:48 PM
Sunbeams do make me smile. Radiance does move, as upon water or glass, etc. You can see it, if your timing is right. Thank you for the great comment. :)
Krutsinger Avatar
August 12, 2020 at 12:57 AM
Your words painted yellow into my soul, but the photo brought in the glazed sheen. A beautiful combination Evelyn
Buehler Avatar
August 12, 2020 at 9:33 AM
I am so glad you liked it, Caren. Thank you so much.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 9:47 AM
gorgeousness!
Buehler Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 10:56 AM
Thank you so much.
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