Sugar Coated

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a sparkling glazed sheen sunshine on my windowpane noonday blooms below goldfinch bush and tree are awash in dazzling light as pale sunbeams dance

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/18/2020 2:35:00 PM

Very nicely imaged... Haven't seen such sunbeams around for awhile. Better adjust my vision, methinks. Sunbeams and Joy, Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/18/2020 2:48:00 PM

Sunbeams do make me smile. Radiance does move, as upon water or glass, etc. You can see it, if your timing is right. Thank you for the great comment. :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/12/2020 12:57:00 AM

Your words painted yellow into my soul, but the photo brought in the glazed sheen. A beautiful combination Evelyn

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/12/2020 9:33:00 AM

I am so glad you liked it, Caren. Thank you so much.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/11/2020 9:47:00 AM

gorgeousness!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/11/2020 10:56:00 AM

Thank you so much.