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sufi whirl

sufi sun
at center
rumi trance

joyful earth
divine love
mystic daze

subtle sound
dizzy beats
rhythm control

floating floor
giddy dance
ego spins

repeat turn
sway slowly
receive grace

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/15/2025 8:25:00 AM

Congratulations on this one being on the winners' list. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara K

thriveni c mysore
Date: 3/15/2025 9:59:00 PM

I am glad you liked the write dear poet, your kind visit and cheers means so much to me dear friend. thank you.

David Crandall

Date: 3/13/2025 8:55:00 PM

Nice poem, this sufi dancing is very interesting.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 3/13/2025 9:18:00 PM

Thank you dear poet for your kind visit. it is interesting yes, to watch only.lol

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/13/2025 6:41:00 PM

Very well penned poem with great vibes within every word, congrats on your win

thriveni c mysore
Date: 3/13/2025 7:26:00 PM

Ah! today shall be mine by your graceful words dear poet. Thank you for your kind visit and happy words. Thank you.

Maclawrence Famuyiwa

Date: 3/13/2025 6:33:00 AM

Nice. Congrats on your win.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 3/13/2025 8:30:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind visit dear poet. Thank you.