Suffering Man

Please note when reading this poem note that the letters in the right collumn will spell the title of this depressing piece of mine.

S           tuck here wondering how I really look
U           nder the surface deep in every little nook
F           ar under the grey that lies in the shadow
F           ar beyond the black area that is narrow
E           verything found deep within
R           emembering each and every last sin
I           nsanity overwhelming I have lost my mind
N           ever finding what I lnoged to find
G           oing down fast please break my fall


M           emories of my past tookover and will not stall
A            nd I continue to admit my wrongs and present all of my Worst
N           ever given warning that my bubble could burst
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Onclaud Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 4:09 AM
a gut-wrenching piece that somehow gives put a ray of hope, sean... wonderfully penned from the depth of your gut!..:) huggs
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