Suffacated in Silence

All the propaganda wrapped up within lies
The who,  what,  when,  where,  and why's
This I despise,  never fall will always rise
Not one of your normal ordinary type guys
I try,  I try, but left here in silent goodbyes
It is sad how we let the good times fly
The fun always dies, I see it in your eyes
Blue pills, blue skies,  the noose it ties
Choking on unspoken replies, no one cries

       We never cry...

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Date: 10/26/2024 2:46:00 AM
Dear brian! Your title brought me here to read this and i must say this is so touching and so sincere and so heartfelt! Sometimes the worst goodbyes are the silent ones unspoken, leaving us dwelling in deafening darkness, you have a way with expressing in ways that can evoke emotions in readers and that is something i really admire in poetry! Keep sharing your voice poetically with us all! Pleasure reading your poem: sending you light always
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Brian Davey
Date: 11/21/2024 4:44:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words I am happy that my words are able to touch the emotions within, These are the things that will keep me writing, thank you for your support
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