Sudden Sun Break

sudden sun break -
goldfinches flit and flutter
in rain soaked grass
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Lawless Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 10:37 AM
Nicely done Deborah, can see the picture vividly displayed herein
Gauthier Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 5:16 PM
What delightful imagery, especially on a cold dreary day. Marvelously done, Deborah.
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