Verlena S. Walker Poet Haiku

Sudden Release

the heaviness of 
        muscle constriction heaves easy
simple touch caresses

a pillar of strength
	apexes amongst the clouds 
a breath of fresh air
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PENNED ON JULY 25, 2014!

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Poet Destroyer A September 3, 2014 at 11:24 AM he he he I will take the hugs and smiles.. now please....LINDA Verlena S. Walker September 3, 2014 at 11:33 AM :0)) & ( )

Poet Destroyer A September 2, 2014 at 10:12 AM sweet, another reply... love Linda Verlena S. Walker September 2, 2014 at 5:52 PM I am here with a hug and a smile. LVerlena

Andrea Dietrich August 26, 2014 at 5:41 PM Congrats for your win, Varlena. Some original thought in this one. Verlena S. Walker August 26, 2014 at 7:45 PM Thanks Andrea... Verlena

Dr.Ram Mehta August 25, 2014 at 5:27 AM I love the images that conveys your thoughts, Verlena. congrats Verlena S. Walker August 25, 2014 at 6:07 AM Thanks Dr. Mehta for your supportive remarks... Verlena

Poet Destroyer A August 24, 2014 at 3:41 PM Verlena, Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest "IN THE CLOUDS!" Take care and enjoy my blog, "Pillow Fights" If you like or have the time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Verlena S. Walker August 24, 2014 at 3:58 PM Thanks for the placement PD. As always, I am sending you a smile and a hug. Verlena

Anna-Marie Docherty July 28, 2014 at 8:28 AM Nice one Verlena - I did re-read to get the benefit of where I missed it with first read... but nicely done... Verlena S. Walker July 28, 2014 at 11:46 AM Thanks Anne-Marie for your supportive comments. LVerlena

Andrea Dietrich July 27, 2014 at 5:15 PM a very interesting approach to this contest. She may have only wanted one and not two, Verlena. Check her rules again. Verlena S. Walker July 27, 2014 at 5:35 PM Thanks Andrea. However, she did not specify... Verlena

Gry Christensen July 26, 2014 at 3:51 PM Hi, very good images you write out. I like it.................and now I feel like stretching my back and look up at the sky. :) Verlena S. Walker July 26, 2014 at 4:25 PM Thanks Gry and I am pleased that you have enjoyed sudden release... Verlena

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 26, 2014 at 2:49 AM Wow very lovely haikus Verlena! Ur words r power packed my friend! Verlena S. Walker July 26, 2014 at 11:06 AM Thanks Dr. Sharma... I enjoy your comments a lot... Verlena