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Sudden Breeze

sudden breeze--- the calendar page turns to june © kash poet 2012

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Terry L. Allen

Date: 4/20/2012 11:54:00 PM

This one is new to me as it is a 3-5-3 and I only have just learned about the 5-7-5. You follow the true tradition of Haiku by using nature as your subject. I understand that It is a Senryu if it is about anything other than nature so I am told. Sounds like you are doing well here. I got the point and the first is a phrase and the second and third line make a sentence. That is what they told me it was supposed to do so great job well done.

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 4/10/2012 6:08:00 PM

Nicely done : ) Bren

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/10/2012 4:46:00 AM

One of my favourite haiku poets.. Such a great haiku .. Kash,Hope you are fine :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/10/2012 2:22:00 AM

howdy, buddy??.. huggs to you! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2012 11:13:00 PM

hey how interesting. I had just come to see if you had posted anything and then I went and saw your note: are you here? Yeah, I am getting ready to go off. Been here since at least 9 p.m and it's after 11. UGGGGG. When will I ever be able to finish in less than two hours????

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/9/2012 2:08:00 PM

Oh please, don't let the calendar turn on April and May....I love those 2 months too! Hope all is well with you... :) Gwendolen

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/9/2012 1:47:00 PM

Oh! I really like this one!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/9/2012 6:39:00 AM

Well done Kash, like it. - oxox Anne-Lise

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/8/2012 5:58:00 PM

Kash, I checked my third line of that one poem but I didn't see what I did wrong. It's seven syllables . Isn't dodoitsu 7/7/7/5? Well, time for comments. Hope you had a nice day like I did. (did you get my pictures of the baby i sent you on email?)

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/8/2012 1:15:00 PM

Nice write Kash, hope your weekend's been a great one :) Wilma

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/8/2012 11:56:00 AM

breezy, brezy 'ku, kashi buddy.. love how you fly with time.. just got back from my vacay; yehey, ashtma and allergy clear for now!. . come visit; missed ya!.. soup mail returned! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/8/2012 8:14:00 AM

a breath of Summer awakening Kash but I so luv May for it is my month to shine luv.. everyone has been worried about u luv.. hope all is well.. u know u have been "bitten" for my cxontest by David Williams luv.. come see what all the buzz is about and join in the fun.. too..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/8/2012 2:00:00 AM

oh, yes, the excellent haiku I saw already. FAVE. Happy Easter to ya, even though I don't think it's on YOUR calender. Luv, Andrea

David Williams

Date: 4/7/2012 9:32:00 AM

Hey Kash, excellent words, have you been hiding, or have I just been missing your blog comments...David

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/6/2012 6:26:00 PM

I am the 6th one here....I am ready to collect my prize now!!! ha ha...Kash, you take the simplest things and turn them into a masterpiece! Very classy, young man...please soup mail me an update... :)

Shirley Long

Date: 4/6/2012 2:08:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your Haiku poem!

Rick Parise

Date: 4/6/2012 12:43:00 PM

Very nice...TOTALLY ENJOYED~great work!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/6/2012 11:36:00 AM

Ah, just a light breeze is all it takes. Sometimes I wish we didn't have calendars and that every month had beautiful weather. Excellent haiku, Kash! Love, Carolyn

Ilene Bauer

Date: 4/6/2012 11:29:00 AM

ha! i like this one a lot!