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Such Beauty

the touch of your skin is like a touch of heaven lingering on me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/19/2009 12:11:00 PM
Nice work Ian, nice analogy...Raul
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Date: 5/19/2009 7:33:00 AM
"lingering on me"-- i like that one:)
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Date: 5/19/2009 7:19:00 AM
oooooo.... that made me tingle. Bravo Ian, beautiful write in such few words!
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Date: 5/19/2009 7:17:00 AM
Pretty stanza.
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