Such Beauty

the touch of your skin
is like a touch of heaven 
lingering on me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Moreno Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 12:11 PM
Nice work Ian, nice analogy...Raul
Al-Riyami Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 7:33 AM
"lingering on me"-- i like that one:)
Gumbo Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 7:19 AM
oooooo.... that made me tingle. Bravo Ian, beautiful write in such few words!
Shahwan Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 7:17 AM
Pretty stanza.
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