Such Abundance

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Clusters of grapes hanging by vines Wonderous delights make fine wines Cultivating a sense of fragile esteem Coloring the moment a heavenly scheme ~ Paths of gorgeous greenery discovered Welcoming scenes that were smothered By fern, pine and laurel; emerald galore Beauties hidden like never seen before ~ Gardens of pink, red and gold flowers Sometimes hidden beneath the showers Blaze bright in the dewy dawn’s sunlight Heaven’s whisper sending down birthright ~ Captivating hedges and rows of vivid blooms Clusters of miracles threatening the glooms Forever rising against the most brutal forces Even giving life to the dance of pretty orchids ~ Roses reason with the calming summer breeze Overjoyed that there is no worry of a freeze Sensations sending angel’s whispering music To all those who tenderly feed their musing ~ All the glories of God’s captivating planet From the luscious orange to the pomegranate There are blessings beyond what we deserve Filling our hearts with gentle caresses to preserve ~ Wherever I go, whatever I do, there are miracles We live in a land that is so alive it seems biblical The Master artist planned all this for our enjoyment We must always thank Him for such entertainment

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Eve Roper

Date: 11/3/2019 8:14:00 AM

your creation is so beautiful an imagery to enjoy.. hugs eve

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/3/2019 6:48:00 AM

Your delightful poem made me walk onto the fields where the vines , dressed with sweet grapes, dance ! Here in Greece I have the good chance to enjoy the sight of such fields. Marvelously done dearest, Regina!

Michelo Mweetwa

Date: 11/3/2019 6:44:00 AM

I love the immense rhymes, the imagery as wonderful as a thousand words a picture can say.

Silent One

Date: 11/3/2019 5:30:00 AM

I have grape vines growing over into my garden from next door.. but ive never tasted any of the grapes... i love this poem and especially the last stanza and your analogy...

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/3/2019 5:24:00 AM

Miracles everywhere.We must thank Him. For sure. "Sensations sending angel’s whispering music To all those who tenderly feed their musing ~" -gorgeously done, Gina.