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Succumb To My Heart

Composed through flickers of ambient light
vanilla wafts permeate solemn halls this night
as life into her passionate pen breathes
talking in code and longing to be

Verdant valleys and flowing waterfalls
mist simple eyes as words echo her call
darkness drips out from the deep black
easing anguished uncertainties held intact

Freeing feelings and setting off subtle swells
releasing evocative imagery from their cells
cravings of brittle bones obediently seek out
to be heard along side her choreographed shout

Succumb slowly dear to my heart in glowing red
Where futures shall lie and pure souls are bled




Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/13/2016 5:03:00 AM
This one is purely beautiful, Tim:)
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Date: 11/12/2016 7:21:00 PM
I love all your beautiful description of the whole of nature Hugs
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Date: 11/12/2016 4:46:00 PM
I just noticed from comments, I assumed this was a sonnet, never the less, beautiful indeed!
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Date: 11/12/2016 4:45:00 PM
That last line "Where futures shall lie and pure souls are bled" wow, great write!
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Date: 11/12/2016 2:01:00 PM
WOW Tim your superb sonnet with great alliteration:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/12/2016 3:29:00 PM
Thanks Jan
Date: 11/12/2016 1:21:00 PM
Oh this is indeed special and beautiful...Vanilla wafts permeate solemn halls..-Such a fantabulous line...Adding it to my fave.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/12/2016 3:28:00 PM
Thank you so much for favoring these simple thoughts Charmu
Date: 11/12/2016 12:53:00 PM
a moveable, remarkable feast of love, tim!.. enjoyed..huggs
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/12/2016 3:27:00 PM
Thank you nette
Date: 11/12/2016 12:49:00 PM
A superb sonnet indeed Tim...took the words right out of my mouth lol...god bless...^WW^
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/12/2016 3:26:00 PM
Thanks WW
Date: 11/12/2016 12:45:00 PM
How marvelous this is my friend, Tim! A seven for certain!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/12/2016 3:26:00 PM
Thank you my friend