Succumb

Tracing Lines along your perfected jaw,
you draw your dark glace towards my eyes.
arms entangled, lying here
the shock sets in,
and you begin,
to unravel your undeniably seductive plan.


Your soft lips meet the tip of my skin,
and my senses start to fly,
like tiny ice crystals melting gently,
I tremble and shake,
as you move slowly down my silky thigh.

The feeling tingles throughout,
like a blur of Ecstasy,
I can feel the urging starting,
from the deepest part of me

My yearning, begs you on,
as we two closer come,
two bodies start aligning,
eyes shining 
with such fires of passion's song.

Gripping, sweaty, moaning,
hot, painful discoveries
are made with loves true tools.
As we explore the every crevice,
and inch,
of each other's being
shamelessly disregarding the rules.

You tease,
I torture,
tantalized we both become,
until even the forces of nature,
cant hold us back,
we must succumb.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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December 23, 2008 at 2:04 PM
Nice poem, welcome to poetry soup and Happyy Holidays...Raul
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