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succulent

succulent orange
sectioned ready for sharing ~
not a soul in sight


AP: 2nd place 2026

Submitted on May 24, 2025 to contest A FRUITY HAIKU sponsored by TANIA KITCHIN - RANKED 3RD
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Goldsmith Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 12:15 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "succulent" write about succulent oranges. Great Picture and I Love Them... Have a blessed day with your win.......
Gauthier Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 8:00 AM
Thanks, Paula. Much appreciated ~
Kitchin Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 11:14 AM
Line, congratulations on your winning placement with your fun haiku.
Gauthier Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 8:01 AM
Thanks, Tania for the fun contest and the award.
Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 12:40 AM
Cute end line. Congrats
Gauthier Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 6:14 AM
Thanks, Andrea ~
Alhemaidy Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 4:21 PM
Interesting pithy write! What about: succulent orange sectioned ready for sharing ~ soul in a sight not
Gauthier Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 4:21 AM
good alternate
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