Succubus

A. W. Nutter

The sun slowly setting, time to rest
Praying constantly to find peace
For just one night I would be blest
Please God, put my mind at ease

Darkness feeds my apprehension
Wondering if the Succubus will appear
One night without her resurrection
To sleep unbridled from my fear

The curtains sway without a breeze
As a shadow approaches my bed
Petrified with a disabling disease
Her ice cold hand strokes my head

The clothing, she begins to remove 
From her paralyzed sexual slave
Laying transfixed unable to move
A corpse being raped in his grave

Infusing my mind with erotic scenes
Devouring my soul as I reach ecstasy
Lips eagerly swallowing my screams
Mentally destroyed by her intimacy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Beesley Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 9:48 AM
bad to the bone....
Trevino Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 10:01 AM
I just wanted to speak my mind and say your writes have good visuals, really awesome.... and now back to your commenting this poem. the fourth stanza was cool the way you put a corpse being raped. What a write, very awesome write, =(^.^)=Royal
Strand Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 8:35 AM
The Ist& 3rd line of your first verse makes a lovely crystalline Anthony.Rgds Brian
K. Avatar
May 27, 2010 at 10:04 PM
Quite an interesting topic you have here, Anthony --I was only vaguely aware of the incubus (hehe thanks to that band), I didn't know it had a counterpart, the succubus...found your write informative and very well written :) Thanks for your comments in my poem :)
Cwiak Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 3:28 AM
Wonderful write on an intensly deep subject. This really gave me some thought. Keep it up! Regards, Dan C
Radford Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 3:33 AM
Thank you for your comments on my work today. This piece is fiery and passionate! Bravo!
Villarosa Avatar
May 22, 2010 at 10:13 PM
Great mind power on being able to attract readers attention. Great rhyming too. Appreciate the time for dropping by to read and post a comment to my poem: The Great Battleship. (^_^) Noel.
Knop Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 9:01 AM
Great visions in your write, Anthony! Well done and thank you for your comments...Gert
Dawson Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 5:23 AM
WOW, very nice! I like this a lot. U got skills!
Brown Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 10:27 AM
It meant so much to me to read your poetry today Anthony. I hope each day takes you to greater heights in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
Neels Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 6:51 AM
I love the visuals you create Mr A! enjoyed it - regards Wilma
Devonshire Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 6:50 AM
Great tale of seduction by the Succubus, Anthony. Provocative thoughts on the man being unable to move! Love, Carolyn
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