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Succubus

A. W. Nutter The sun slowly setting, time to rest Praying constantly to find peace For just one night I would be blest Please God, put my mind at ease Darkness feeds my apprehension Wondering if the Succubus will appear One night without her resurrection To sleep unbridled from my fear The curtains sway without a breeze As a shadow approaches my bed Petrified with a disabling disease Her ice cold hand strokes my head The clothing, she begins to remove From her paralyzed sexual slave Laying transfixed unable to move A corpse being raped in his grave Infusing my mind with erotic scenes Devouring my soul as I reach ecstasy Lips eagerly swallowing my screams Mentally destroyed by her intimacy

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Anthony Beesley

Date: 9/1/2010 9:48:00 AM

bad to the bone....

Royal Trevino

Date: 6/5/2010 10:01:00 AM

I just wanted to speak my mind and say your writes have good visuals, really awesome.... and now back to your commenting this poem. the fourth stanza was cool the way you put a corpse being raped. What a write, very awesome write, =(^.^)=Royal

Brian Strand

Date: 5/31/2010 8:35:00 AM

The Ist& 3rd line of your first verse makes a lovely crystalline Anthony.Rgds Brian

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/27/2010 10:04:00 PM

Quite an interesting topic you have here, Anthony --I was only vaguely aware of the incubus (hehe thanks to that band), I didn't know it had a counterpart, the succubus...found your write informative and very well written :) Thanks for your comments in my poem :)

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 5/26/2010 3:28:00 AM

Wonderful write on an intensly deep subject. This really gave me some thought. Keep it up! Regards, Dan C

Helen J Radford

Date: 5/24/2010 3:33:00 AM

Thank you for your comments on my work today. This piece is fiery and passionate! Bravo!

Noel Villarosa

Date: 5/22/2010 10:13:00 PM

Great mind power on being able to attract readers attention. Great rhyming too. Appreciate the time for dropping by to read and post a comment to my poem: The Great Battleship. (^_^) Noel.