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Succinct Queen

Unconventionally brilliant
Champions that are resilient
To being rocked down the chart
Living forever in our hearts
Sounds make you want to break free
From the boundaries of conformity
Let them rock you til you drop
Play the game, never stop
Like Mercury rising up the gauge
Under pressure to perform on stage
A kind of magic then ensues
The crowd erupt so enthused
The show must go on still
That would be Freddie’s will
He wanted somebody to love and trust
Not another one that bites the dust
Mr Fahrenheit will live forever
Their songs so many will treasure
Killer Queen come what May
But not without the great Mercury!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/4/2016 12:50:00 PM
I really like this. I too was a fan of this group. And I even considered doing my poem on Freddy too. but it's YOUR group to do. I think i will try Three Dog night. haha
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Laura Hay
Date: 9/8/2016 4:19:00 AM
Aww thanks Andrea, i'm sure you could have done it on Freddy with a different take to mine of course as anything you write would be fantastic! Good luck with your poem whatever you decide to do ;) warm regards, Laura.
Date: 9/1/2016 12:03:00 PM
This must be for the rock 'n roll contest, Laura....The Queen and Freddie Mercury are on their way to rise up the charts once again, thanks to your clever write:) I hope the judge likes this as much as I do! Warm regards // paul
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Laura Hay
Date: 9/2/2016 7:30:00 AM
It sure is for the contest Paul. I love listening to all sorts of music, i have a bit of an ecclectic taste i think. Nice to hear you liked this one Paul. Your kind comments are always welcome! Warm regards, Laura.

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