Success

even great mountains
grow to become a small stone
resting upon ground





(April 20 2016)

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Funom Makama

May 5, 2016 at 1:13 PM

This is is fine piece with soul-reaching quality. I love this so much

Bl Devnath

April 23, 2016 at 3:17 PM

Excellent. A 7 sure. Beautifully done. Loved always my lovely friend, bl

Jan Allison

April 22, 2016 at 12:05 PM

deep haiku J Tudor - I can relate am taking stock of my life too but sadly some things you can never change:-( hugs Jan xx

J. Tudor

April 22, 2016 at 12:36 PM

It seems the only thing one can change is "now"...but even that can be a challenge, especially when the aches and pains and limitations of age are taken into consideration! Thanks for dropping by Jan. J.

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 20, 2016 at 2:27 PM

- Wonderful written - meaningful three lines, J. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

J. Tudor

April 20, 2016 at 6:05 PM

Thank You Anne Lise...coming from the Queen of Haiku, I am honored! : ) J.

Nette Onclaud

April 20, 2016 at 1:17 PM

splendid 'ku written in a soulful way, J..huggs

J. Tudor

April 20, 2016 at 1:43 PM

Thank you nette...I suddenly realized that I was trying too hard to write what I wanted to, so I wrote what I needed to! Does that make sense? Simple words from a simple mind. J.