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even great mountains grow to become a small stone resting upon ground (April 20 2016)

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Funom Makama

Date: 5/5/2016 1:13:00 PM

This is is fine piece with soul-reaching quality. I love this so much

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/23/2016 3:17:00 PM

Excellent. A 7 sure. Beautifully done. Loved always my lovely friend, bl

Jan Allison

Date: 4/22/2016 12:05:00 PM

deep haiku J Tudor - I can relate am taking stock of my life too but sadly some things you can never change:-( hugs Jan xx

J. Tudor
Date: 4/22/2016 12:36:00 PM

It seems the only thing one can change is "now"...but even that can be a challenge, especially when the aches and pains and limitations of age are taken into consideration! Thanks for dropping by Jan. J.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/20/2016 2:27:00 PM

- Wonderful written - meaningful three lines, J. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

J. Tudor
Date: 4/20/2016 6:05:00 PM

Thank You Anne Lise...coming from the Queen of Haiku, I am honored! : ) J.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/20/2016 1:17:00 PM

splendid 'ku written in a soulful way, J..huggs

J. Tudor
Date: 4/20/2016 1:43:00 PM

Thank you nette...I suddenly realized that I was trying too hard to write what I wanted to, so I wrote what I needed to! Does that make sense? Simple words from a simple mind. J.

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 4/20/2016 12:30:00 PM

Love this 3 liner :-)

J. Tudor
Date: 4/20/2016 12:37:00 PM

Just reviewing my own life...Thank you Lenny. J.

Anu Nayak

Date: 4/20/2016 11:56:00 AM

lovely Haiku, kudos! deep meaning embedded.........love, Anu:)

J. Tudor
Date: 4/20/2016 12:42:00 PM

My wise Grandmother used to tell me "words don't have meaning...people do". Perhaps that applies here.! Thank you for your kind thoughts. J.