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Success

Cuts like glass upon my face. But I, the failure, won the race. And now that I have passed the test, all there is left to do is rest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/25/2010 9:11:00 AM
What a wonderful way to spend this snowy day reading poetry. I am so happy that yours was amongst the ones I am reading today. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry today Brooke. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/24/2010 11:32:00 AM
The poem makes me wonder and has a great rhyme scheme. But I wish I knew a little more. What makes this your definition of success? Is it a good or bad thing that cuts you like glass? I think you can go farther with this poem.
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