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‘Success’ won’t impress The Creator Who heeds every deed Now and later

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Date: 5/22/2025 6:02:00 AM
Truly! That is why humility is so important. God bless you, Hannah! A Pastor’s wife wrote about a young man who had a near death experience. He saw Jesus who asked him what he had done for Him. He started naming his accomplishments and Jesus said, no what have you done for me? Something we all need to think about.
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Hannah Borke
Date: 5/22/2025 6:13:00 AM
Thank you for liking my short rhyme. I’m Jewish.

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