Success

So, you might be thinking,
Was the weekend a success?
Our grandson staying over
In the city? Goodness, yes!

The bus, the train, the dinosaurs,
A tournament of chess,
A playground smack in Central Park
And who could ever guess...

A play date with a neighbor's kids
Without a drop of stress
And dinner in a noodle place 
One block from our address;

A fruit stand stop, hot cocoa,
Easy bedtimes (no duress),
A checker game and reading books
(Pinocchio, no less).

The proof, though, lies in Henry's words
Which I do not finesse:
"Can I come back next weekend?"
I would say that spells success.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Wolf Avatar
December 11, 2019 at 1:16 PM
Success to the nth degree! Mazeltov. Much nachas from Henry, Ilene! :) gw
Rigoler Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 2:28 PM
I think women are superior to men when it comes to putting up with kids. Loved your rhymes ending in "ess" "esse." And I'm always amazed at the fluidity your lines possess. You're a born versifier and a poet. Much enjoyed. / M
Krutsinger Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 3:45 AM
I want you to adopt me and let me come visit. You did all of my favorite things, and I am sure you are a blast! Well done.
Na Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 11:01 PM
Hi Ilene sounds like your weekend was fantastic. Arent grandchildren the best. Thanks for sharing this
Gauthier Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 10:14 PM
Totally charming poem, Ilene. Weekend party at Grandma's!
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