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Subtle Glance

Fluttering heart beats within My love passes with quick glance I feel the burning passion So subtle that only I can see 2/15/2022 Lind30

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Linda Craddick

Date: 2/15/2022 11:57:00 AM

Hi, Jeff! I have not tried the word version. I'm really not a fan of limited syllables. I am a rambler, and I don't do well with limits. haha I'm a teacher about to retire, so I fall back on poetry when my head hurts from trying to decide if I need another career or if I just want to relax. So far, relax has a lot more tallies in its column!

Jeff Kyser

Date: 2/15/2022 9:34:00 AM

These lind30s are interesting - have you tried one with the limits on words rather than syllables? That just seems weird to me, I already struggle when they want 7,7,7,9 lol. Have a great day!