Kim Van Breda Poet I do not know?

Subterranium Surrealism

SUBTERRANIUM SURREALISM

if you can from your head
try make an opaque face

a spoon down the throat
left me speechless when
it counted the most

so many spaces and rooms
rooms of rooms of rooms

pebble portraits of bottle-top birds
scraps of paper bearing blood words

stains imprinted in a life
unlearned



© Kim van Breda—24 October 2015

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Richard Lamoureux October 26, 2015 at 9:28 AM Interesting imagery! Kim Van Breda October 26, 2015 at 6:21 PM Thanks Richard.. your encouragement is always appreciated ~~X~~

Kim Van Breda October 25, 2015 at 6:02 PM Thanks Michael and Mal... that's it... no part 2 or continuation...I made my point.. I think.. :) ~~X~~