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descent: crack! sear sting oh… shocked into clarity sharp edged relief of now laid bare on a tempest slick satin slides catches my wrists pulls up pulls tight paradigm shift into controlessness now bleeds into forever the lash polishes beauty breathe, baby shallow and slow pulse under fingertips my tensile strength stretch tested stripped to basic need growl groan glissando snap crackle pop exploration: intellectual understanding withers in the flare of experiential wisdom. to be willingly splayed to the whim of Fate is freedom. how many times have you seen your true self? do you look away from your flaws, your deep secrets? hidden in your safe, little boundaries, do you wonder about the depth of your perceptions? the life of the mind, sliced loose from so called reality, lunges into the unknown with a will. how far back does the cave go? surfacing: it begins to creep in the blade of lamplight the spinning fan the cool, damp pillow flutterblink and sigh stretch against the wondrous ache, a souvenir downsplashed again on a tragically mistaken world color dims as soul sight recedes sound unlayers and sinks to mere noise muted and glaring, life awaits reentrance oh, fine. if I must…

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Date: 3/31/2010 9:51:00 AM
I am so impressed with these, we seem to have fairly similar styles. (To be honest, I get bored easily with 'traditional' poems, so your freshness in thought and words, words that are blatantly expressive make these works quite intense)!
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Date: 3/24/2010 9:12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Shelli. Thank you for sharing it. Hoping you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/23/2010 7:05:00 PM
it's lovely to find a kindred spirit, such a rare and wondrous thing. it was actually reading your work that gave me the boldness to post this. i am delighted you enjoyed it.
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Date: 3/23/2010 6:59:00 PM
Thank you so much for your comment. I am equally enthralled by your work. This in particular is incredible. My good lady, may a chorus of angels sing you too sleep.
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