Kim Rodrigues Poet Haiku

Submissive Silk Sheets Sexyku

“We want a story that starts out with an earthquake
and works it way up to a climax”     Samuel Goldwyn

SUBMISSIVE SILK SHEETS Sexyku

steady knocking of
  headboard conjuring up a
merciless flashpoint

11/6/2019
Sexyku Poetry Contest
Sponsor -Richard Lamoureux

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Gershon Wolf November 6, 2019 at 5:04 PM Wow, Kim! This one is rated: 'SD' for Sexual Dynamite! BOOM! Smiles, Gershon Kim Rodrigues November 6, 2019 at 7:58 PM LOL...thanks, dear poet!

Kurt Ravidas November 6, 2019 at 3:33 PM Wow, these two, I mean Goldwyn's quotation and Kim's haiku can cause something bigger than an earthquake) Mercilessly cool pen. Good luck in the contest, Kim. Kim Rodrigues November 6, 2019 at 3:36 PM LOL...thanks, Kurt!

Jack Horne November 6, 2019 at 3:09 PM oh, love this Kim Rodrigues November 6, 2019 at 3:19 PM Thanks, Jack!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart November 6, 2019 at 9:11 AM Ooh! Sucked in by that fabulous title then whoosh! A sizzler! A winner for sure! All the best, xomo! Kim Rodrigues November 6, 2019 at 9:13 AM Thanks, Maureen :)

Sarban Bhattacharya November 6, 2019 at 8:32 AM That imagery is enough to render a guy restless.Skilfully written, Kim ! Kim Rodrigues November 6, 2019 at 9:01 AM LOL...then the ku worked its magic. Thank you, Sarban!

Vijay Pandit November 6, 2019 at 8:11 AM I hear that sound--well delivered, Kim. Kim Rodrigues November 6, 2019 at 8:23 AM Thanks, Vijay!

Chris Green November 6, 2019 at 7:44 AM Hey, can you keep it down over there, some of us are trying to sleep? :) Warmly done Kim. Kim Rodrigues November 6, 2019 at 7:45 AM LOL....stop banging on the wall...will ya! All in fun :)