Submerged Love

A hidden protected love which will surface now and than. Submerged into the 
deepest waters of the ocean floor. Why it is so still? Like an ocean plant frozen in 
place. Could it be devoured? Only by yourself. No one else can harm this submerged 
love and the effect it has on us.
It's like a gateway of roads and highways manifesting into a bold flight with colorful 
patterns of gazing light that enters in our eyes and alows a sudden twinkle. This 
love is submerged deep into the mounds of lakes and rivers combining forced 
airways climbing through our hearts.
We can visualize almost anything but a silent love that only shows itself when 
invited.
Love can be dwelling or it can be timid. However it shows itself is how the true love 
feels. It can overpower you or just look you in the eye. Either way it is gentle. Like 
an anchor which is held down this love is anchored but can release itself as a gentle 
blossom flourishing like a million blossoms from one vine to another. Climbing to the 
top and finding it's way home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/14/2011 7:14:00 PM
Go to My Poems on the left, you will see a list of all the poems you have written...when you see the one you want to edit go all the way to the right on the same line as that poem & you'll see EDIT DELETE..click edit, the poem will come up and you can work on it, when done scroll down to the botton click UPDATE ..this will work too!
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Date: 4/12/2011 1:40:00 PM
loved the title tina and the poem, a very creative piece. thank you for readng the poems you did and for your comments. as far as i know there is no charge for the contest, but you have to follow the rules on the way you write the poem, just go to the contest for who is giving it and the rules will be there.
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Date: 4/11/2011 4:13:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Tina. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/9/2011 10:10:00 PM
"silent love that only shows itself when invited..." we have to invite it ..so true!! The courage it takes to do it is to live life fully!
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