Subliminal

Reaching unto the Passing light everything coming, of life's allowance, 
realisation.' the way of creations travel; and resultant living glimpsed..' 
there is the Presence of possibility's and the placing of days.. Even unto deeds
time not Divine wasted by 
precocity & the mediocre, brooks of life's
insincerity.' Sweep no pathway clean.

©Joe Maverick 28-10-2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/13/2015 10:36:00 AM
read this one
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Date: 11/7/2015 2:31:00 PM
Known as Super Postion in Particle Physics...the potential of all states at once. Good write Joe!
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Date: 11/5/2015 10:10:00 AM
I reckon that last line is a piece of purely brilliant poetry. Well crafted. Ooh and I like the rest of the poem too.
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Date: 11/2/2015 3:25:00 AM
What a fabulous write friend. The flow of your excellent write depicted imagery that brought your write to life within this reader's sense. This is indeed a brilliant write, it so much beautiful and excellent.....stay blessed...........A.M.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 11/2/2015 2:54:00 PM
Many thanks for your kind words Afolabi, I will also find time to visit you when able..'
Date: 11/1/2015 4:25:00 AM
If one can only recognize a parallel world, made be wrong could be right or vice-versa? I read this Joe, as it is today, enjoyed the poem, making me think, and then again think.
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Date: 11/1/2015 4:30:00 AM
Thank you for taking time over this Harry, although truly time is only while we are here, in the blink of eternity it will with many 'things' disappear..'
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