Sublime, My Sprinkler

See her reach 'cross wide swaths of green

  Magic fingers, droplets ~ rainbow's sheen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
July 10, 2020 at 3:56 PM
I love my sprinkler too.
Romios Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 9:01 AM
Gershon, this is just wonderful, no kidding. I envy your art of simplicity. A FAV Panagiota xx
Wolf Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 5:36 PM
Gosh, thank you so much for the FAV, Panagiota. I don't get too many. Much appreciated. Best always, Gershon
Buehler Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 11:23 PM
This is a beautiful depiction of rain and rainbows, and the imagery is wonderful. Best wishes, Evelyn :=)
Wolf Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 5:36 PM
Thanks for such a lovely comment, Evelyn. Blessings, Gershon
Ball Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 10:01 PM
On a hot day there is nothing like a sprinkler no matter how old you are. God Bless my friend. JB
Wolf Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 10:19 PM
Ha, ha! Not that you or I are getting old, or anything... Sprinkle, sprinkle, a little tar // Guess how old I really are. (Groan!) Thanks, Judy. All the best, Gershon
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