Sublime, My Sprinkler

See her reach 'cross wide swaths of green Magic fingers, droplets ~ rainbow's sheen

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/10/2020 3:56:00 PM

I love my sprinkler too.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/9/2020 9:01:00 AM

Gershon, this is just wonderful, no kidding. I envy your art of simplicity. A FAV Panagiota xx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/9/2020 5:36:00 PM

Gosh, thank you so much for the FAV, Panagiota. I don't get too many. Much appreciated. Best always, Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/8/2020 11:23:00 PM

This is a beautiful depiction of rain and rainbows, and the imagery is wonderful. Best wishes, Evelyn :=)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/9/2020 5:36:00 PM

Thanks for such a lovely comment, Evelyn. Blessings, Gershon

Judy Ball

Date: 7/8/2020 10:01:00 PM

On a hot day there is nothing like a sprinkler no matter how old you are. God Bless my friend. JB

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/8/2020 10:19:00 PM

Ha, ha! Not that you or I are getting old, or anything... Sprinkle, sprinkle, a little tar // Guess how old I really are. (Groan!) Thanks, Judy. All the best, Gershon