Nudershada Cabanes Poet Sijo

Sublime Beauty Visual Number Three

Spring has cast her spell turning everything into a canvas 
          Painting the sky with blazing colors, the fields with blooming flowers 
               My sight is drunk in the sublime beauty that my eyes beheld






                                          Glorious Sijo Fields 
                                      Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich 
                                            February 5, 2015

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Skat A February 15, 2015 at 10:48 PM Nudershada, Awesome take, Congrats in Andrea's Sijo contest. -- SKAT

Sara Kendrick February 9, 2015 at 3:04 PM Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

Jan Allison February 8, 2015 at 2:19 PM Beautifully penned - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux February 8, 2015 at 8:40 AM Congratulations on a fine win.

Andrea Dietrich February 8, 2015 at 12:58 AM I really like this one. It will be even better if you use the present tense "behold" at the very end of the last line because I think you are in the moment!! Congrats for your win in my contest.