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Sublime Beauty Visual Number Three

Spring has cast her spell turning everything into a canvas Painting the sky with blazing colors, the fields with blooming flowers My sight is drunk in the sublime beauty that my eyes beheld Glorious Sijo Fields Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich February 5, 2015

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Skat A

Date: 2/15/2015 10:48:00 PM

Nudershada, Awesome take, Congrats in Andrea's Sijo contest. -- SKAT

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/9/2015 3:04:00 PM

Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 2/8/2015 2:19:00 PM

Beautifully penned - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/8/2015 8:40:00 AM

Congratulations on a fine win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/8/2015 12:58:00 AM

I really like this one. It will be even better if you use the present tense "behold" at the very end of the last line because I think you are in the moment!! Congrats for your win in my contest.