Subject: Winter
rude cold pierces bone
footsteps…signal subzero
powder crunches loud
-----------------------------------
lungs ache with pin pricks
nose burns…sinuses frozen
short breaths fog vision
----------------------------------
cold overtakes sense
life…dependent on senses
must find shelter now
Post Comments
Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.
Please
Login
to post a comment
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a
Premium Membership.
