Stupor Nova

Devoted consolement, The need for Atonement As gravity claims the best of me- Drawing me me closer to the hum of the Sea Then arisen to clouds, far past the sky Swimming the space of the Milky Way In star's blue arms, forever lie While I dreamt those dreams to-day

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Jake Ponce

Date: 10/13/2013 8:18:00 AM

It's really awesome how you articulate your thoughts in a crazy-creative way. This one takes me back to those moments when I'm borderline drunk. All the swirling beautiful mess of lights, voices and darkness before I pass-out simulate a celestial trance LOL

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/13/2013 8:31:00 AM

lol Thanks again, Jake. I have a lot of pieces inspired by alcohol and drugs. I appreciate the compliments and feedback :)