Just That Archaic Poet Poet Rhyme

Stupor Nova

Devoted consolement,
The need for Atonement
As gravity claims the best of me-
Drawing me me closer to the hum of the Sea
Then arisen to clouds, far past the sky
Swimming the space of the Milky Way
In star's blue arms, forever lie
While I dreamt those dreams to-day

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Jake Ponce October 13, 2013 at 8:18 AM It's really awesome how you articulate your thoughts in a crazy-creative way. This one takes me back to those moments when I'm borderline drunk. All the swirling beautiful mess of lights, voices and darkness before I pass-out simulate a celestial trance LOL Just That Archaic Poet October 13, 2013 at 8:31 AM lol Thanks again, Jake. I have a lot of pieces inspired by alcohol and drugs. I appreciate the compliments and feedback :)