Stupid Words

i look in the mirror and the mirror shatters
bit and peices say what you say matters
look at your family and friends
they think this is where your life ends
the are worried why can you see
that all your negativity
is hurting everyone so let it be
you say your a hero but you cant even save your own life
someone might as well come and stab you with a knife
you hear that they are calling for you
syaoran they want to help you
dont leave yet im not done
im telling you what needs to be so dont run
I slowly respond im not a fighter im a writer
but you use that writing for the worst choice
dont write use your voice
i punch they shards of glass
i hear one last stupid phrase save yourself dont be an ass
These voices wont go away
Why wont they leeave today
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Bishop Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 2:54 PM
lol yes i know i spelt a few things wrong the computer wasnt working right and i was in a rush to get this up
Brown Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 7:12 AM
A very interesting and enjoyable read Dennis. Hope you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 8:33 PM
the voices spelled it wrong...hehe.....enjoyed reading your poem.
Matt Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 2:29 PM
Nice introspection, but you might want to use spell check. Just a thought.
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