Stupid Heart

My heart is naughty,
it causes me pain.
Falls in love
time and again.
Never chooses a nice guy,
just the ones
that cheat and lie.
Listen up heart,
do what you're told.
Choose me a good one,
before I'm too old.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Hamilton Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 4:28 PM
Jenny welcome to Soup very nice poem keep writing Shadow x smiles
Brewer Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 12:15 AM
hi shadow,thank you.
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
August 3, 2013 at 8:46 PM
Ha, if only we could command our hearts Jenny to do our bidding...but the heart is a powerful, yet fickle steward of our love. Though if you ever figure out how to control it,...soup mail me straight away! LOL! MC
Morgan Avatar
August 1, 2013 at 3:13 AM
if only you know, your heart is sold, bought with shiny gold, to a man who is old. Me. . . ha ha ha
Brewer Avatar
August 1, 2013 at 3:16 AM
Ha ha,but do you have the goods?xx thank you for reading my poems xx
Batts Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 6:09 PM
I dig the rhythm.
Smith Avatar
July 26, 2013 at 2:29 AM
More great writing from you I see. Welcome to the soup! See Ya
Brewer Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 12:13 AM
hi russell, thank you.
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